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Hello Ms. Yeonji^-^
Happy happy New year!
Ye's i'll be glad to do you a favor
Dear khristine,
=Dear Khristine,
Could you do me a favor?
When you correct my diary,
Please, don't earase (erase) the wrong things but add your comment.
I don't remember it i wrote
=I don't remember what I wrote
It is true that many children wants to be a knight.
I'm telling you the reason why they think it is their hero.
Knights ride the best horse and are in glitter armor.
=Knights ride the best horses and they are in a glittering armor.
Many children are always fascinated by image of knight.
=...byt the mere image of a knight.
They know that the knights always fought against evil for the definition.
=..against the evil...
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