Trees in a city give us many benefitss.
=...the city gives us many benefits.
First of all, trees give us a lovely scenery and improve our personal health.
=...improves
They also improve our environment and our quality of life.
They make cities beautiful.
Second, they influence on our emotion and provide many mental benefits.
=Secondly, they influence our emotions...
Healthy forest is essential factor for people to maintain health.
=A healthy forest is an essential factor...
When we are watching trees, we feel calm and peaceful.
=..watching the trees...
Therefore, we have to plant many trees to improve our health and mental condition.
P.S. A very nice thought it is that you have