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Hello Jake,
I am glad you decided to give writing a try, here are a few pointers for you to remember, first check your spelling and capitalization, second, check your verb tenses apply the same verb form throughout your sentence . You have done well on your first try. Do keep this up please.
Here are our corrections:
when I was a high school student.
> When I was a high school student.
I lent some money to my best friend since he utgently needed some money at the time he asked me to lend some money.
> I lent some money to my best friend, since he urgently needed some money at that time.
he promised that he would give it back to me within two weeks.
> He promised that he would give it back to me within two weeks.
> He promised that he would pay it back within two weeks.
But, following The due day , he consecutively made excuses why he couldn`t give money back to me in time.
> But on the due date, he continuously made excuses and would not give me back my money on time.
at that time, I realized that lending money to friends is not good for both of us.
> At that time I realized that lending money to friends is not good for the both of us.
though I begged my parents to borrow money for him.
> Though I begged my parents to get the money from him.
> Though I begged my parents to lend him money.
he didn`t keep the promise. ( is that suitable word for promise? )
> He didn't keep his promise.
> He did not keep his end of the bargain.
But, but I learned something valuable though this experience
> But I learned something valuable from this experience.
please , correct wrong sentence in my dialy and have a wonderful day ^^
> Please correct the wrong sentences from this written piece about my daily life and have a wonderful day.
Have a good day too Jake, see you tomorrow. you did great with this one.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher nea : )
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