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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   chlhyun    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-01-04
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hello Jo!
I hope you are having a great time with the snow today!

I am very happy to Welcome you here in You Can English!

I encourage you to write more!

 

Study well!

Take care!

-teacher jha

 

CORRECTION:

 

today morning, snow fall on the city.
>>>This morning, snow started to fall in my city.

 

so i was talk to my teacher. "i like snow"
>>>So, I told my teacher "I like snow"

 

and than she ask to me "why?"
>>>and then she asked me "why?"

 

but i couldn't tell her (to) certainly answer.
>>>but I couldn't tell her a certain answer.

 

therefore, i write a reason this here.
>>>So, I wrote a reason here.

 

when snow fall, city is changed to white city from dark city by snow.
>>>When snow falls, the city changes  to  a white city from a dark city.

 

white city is look like clean city. so i like snow
>>>A white city looks clean so I like snow.

 

but i hate a smoothly road. too

>>>But I hate a slippery road .

 

 

VOCABULARY:

*smooth - free from obstructions

*slippery - causing or tending to cause things to slip or slide

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