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Hello Mary,
i am glad you wrote, don't worry about being absent we can catch up with our lesson tomorrow.
Here are some corrections to your written work:
Nea, I'm sorry to absent yesterday.
> Nea I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.
> Nea, I'm sorry for missing class yesterday.
Hellow, Nea. I'm sorry to absent yesterday.
> Check your spelling.
> Hello Nea, I'm sorry for being absent yesterday.
I came into seoul, several days ago, and started the study meeting directly.
> I went to Seoul several days ago and had to start studying for my meeting immediately.
So, I couldn't have time to rest.
> Check your verb tenses.
> So I didn't have time to rest.
I suffer from an atopic disease. Then, my disease is deepen since I'm came back Seoul.
> i suffer from an atopic disease and it has worsend since I came back from Seoul.
> I am truly sorry to hear this.
So, I took a medicine which treat the disease and make me sleepy. Maybe because I slept deeply, I didn't hear ringing my phone.
> So I took some medicine to treat the disease and it made me sleepy. I was in such a deep sleep that i didn't hear my phone ringing.
Ah, and, My cellphone's battery is not charged enough, because I didn't take my battery charger connector.
Oh, and my cellphone's battery is not charged fully, because I didn't take my battery charger connector.
:p
So, my cellphone's battery is very low. I can't convince that my cellphone is alive. If it is possible, I want to postpone our class tommorow.
> So my cellphone's battery is very low. I am not sure if my cellphone is still functioning. If it is possible I would like to postpone our class for tomorrow.
>> mary as for putting your class on hold, please try to call our manager for him to officially postpone the class. I understand your dilemma. I do hope though that we would be able to see each other tomorrow.
Have a great evening. I hope you feel better.
TEacher NEa : )
It it my all message, nea. Happy new year and have a gool luck. |
