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Hi Ms. Yeonji!
Whoa! I wonder how that someone looked like
when she was scared about the size of your thighs
Well, being fit or being in a good shape is actually
an issue about oneself.
So maybe that's the reason why people would say that your life
will be changed if you succeeded in your goal of becoming slim^-^
What i'm saying is that, if you've successfully done something for yourself,
then it means to say that you are flexible and that you are an
adaptive person but at the same time you are susceptible about
how others would think about you^-^
>>>Here are some grammar corections:
l've gone on a diet. My thigh is too thick.
=I've gone on a diet because my thighs are too thick.
I want to have slim legs.
Someone who I don't know said that my belly is cute but my thighs makes her scared.
I was shocked.
People say that If you succed in a diet, your life will be changed.
I want to change my life as being a slim woman.
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