Hi Ms. Yeonji!
Whoa! It was fun reading your piece.
I t contains information, lessons and trivias eh!
I like it^-^
I'm looking forward to receive another one from you again^-^
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Jenny went to the kitchen. Mom was cooking and greated her.
=...greeted her.
She huged her mom.
=...hugged her mom.
Mom giving jenny limitless love felt happy. It was the reason they love each other.
It is very important and useful thing that people write a book. Jenny has writen books about animal for 20years. The books by Jenny are known to people. To protect animals, she donates much money to the commitee. Also,she has worked hard for protecting animals.
People have used dandelion for food. In some country, it is true that people have used dandelion for food. Dandelion has much vitamin A and C. It's most useful part is leaf. When it's leaf is soft, some people cook it. Even we can eat yellow flower. Roots also can be cooked and eaten. I want to invent the way people cook it well. |