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Hello Mary,
Thank you for writing : )
Here are our corrections:
p.87)
: For a period of the teacher training, I sufferd the frustrating thing that I couldn't teach the class systematic.
> For a period in teacher training, I suffered through a very frustrating thing, I couldn't teach my class systematiclly.
It was the most important problem of my expriences. I teach my students too flexibly.
> It was the most important problem I've encountered during my experience. I taugh my students a little bit to flexibly.
When I heard that, I frustrated and dissapointed. So I practiced the teaching many times.
> When I hear that, I was frustrated and disappointed, so I practiced teaching many times.
So I have confidence to teach children more than at that time.
> So I had more confidence to teach children after that time.
p.96)
: When I just started the teacher training, I'm asked for caring of one rabbit.
> When I just started the teacher's training, I was adked to care for one rabbit.
But the rabbit died soon sadly.
> Sadly the rabbit died soon.
I shocked by that incident and couldn't have the enough time to prepare.
> I was so shocked by that incident and wasn't prepared for it.
It continued to next and next class.
> My emotion of shock continued on till my next class and the next and the next...
But If I got over that quickly, I could achive more successful teacher training.
> If I had gotten over that quickly I would have achieved more success in my teacher training.
So I decided that I'll be strong and have nomal condition even what situation is happened. It's just my work ethic.
> SO I decided that I needed to be strong and normal, even when situations like that happen, this is my work ethic.
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