Hello Ms. Yeonji
I received a piece regarding you going to the clinic
last Wednesday(If this writing is waht you are referring too).
I received it and made the necessary corrections too
But if it was a different piece then we'll try to
check it for you
Here in my country, we usually just smile and say "Hi po" or "Hello po"
"Po" is the word that we use as a respect for all the people around us,
whether it is a child or an adult but most especially to the people older than us.
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The various kind of greeting in the world
It is very important to say a greeting well. All the countries have their custom which is to say hello to other people. In Eurupe, Man and Woman ,when they meet first, usally shake hands. But, In Arab contries, Man never shake hands with a wemen who is not associated with them. In Korea, People nod a greeting. So, when Korean come to other contries, they should consider other country's custom to get along with foreigners.
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Title: The Various Kinds of Greeting in the World
It is very important to deliver a greeting very well.
All countries have their own custom on how they would say hello to other people.
In Europe, men and women, when they first meet usually shake hands.
But in Arab countries, the man never shake hands with a woman who is not associated with him.
In Korea, people nod to greet each other. (They do bow to each other too, right?)
So when Koreans go to other countries, they should consider other country's
custom to get along with foreigners.
Teacher Khristine
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