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Hello Jake,
Early start today.
Here are the corrections:
What's better for my future.
> What's better for my future?
As the days go by,some of my friends make up their mind to start managing their own business.
> As the days go by, some of my friends have made up their minds to start their own business.
That make me feel a little bit nervous.
> That makes me feel a little bit nervous.
Since my friends are gradually getting used to society and making more money than I anticipated.
In spite of the fact that my friends are doing well in their own way.
I still have to go to school.
But I now have realized that there is nothing I can do and I`d better focus on my own stuff.
>> :) Good sentences, but I want you to know that the possibilities are endless, there are so many things that you can do while studying...
I`m sure that it will make me better person in the future.
> :)
As my parents also put it , managing a business never guarantees stable life and there are many up and down in a business
> As my parents put it, business never guarantees a stable life, there are many ups and downs in business.
I can`t argure with it. But, I`m too young to give up my dream of managing my own business.
> I can't argue with that, but I am too young to give up my dreams of managing my own business.
I agree... Aja! Keep the dream alive.
Teacher Nea :) |
