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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   mini1230    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-01-12
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Hello Kevin^-^

Oh! I'm sorry to hear about your colds.

I hope that you would get better as soon as possible^-^

 

Go run some meters in the morning, drink fruit juices

and warm water and try to have steam inhalation

with deep breathing exercise.

Cover your nose when sneezing and dispose your tissues properly

 

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Title: I got colds

 

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  today when i was doing class i caufh alot. i thing lgot colds. now my neck is really hearting. i hope i could get out of this colds

=Today when I was having class, I coughed a lot. I think  I caught a cold. Now my neck really hurts. I hope I could get out of this colds.

 

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