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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   hilica    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-01-13
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Hello Ms. Yeonji!

 

I think computers are really very useful but sometimes

people don't do things the right way already because they would just

press control C and control V for their homeworks without even reading it

 

 

 

>>>Here are the following corrections. Kindly check on them^-^

Comeputers are used to running machines and factories.
They are also used to write and teach writing.
And they are widely used as a tool of communication.
By using the computer, we exchange e-mail massage each other.
The computer must be necessary thing to every people.

 

=Computers are used to run machines in factories.

They are widely used to write, to teach and also used as a tool for communication.

By usin gthe computer, we can exchange e-mail messages to each other.

The computer must be a necessary thing to every people.

 

 

Teacher Khristine

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