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Can you count how many people around you have had cosmetic surgery dones?
:Maybe I know more 5 person, my friends,coworkers includeing my sister
>>> Maybe I know more than 5 people including my friends, co-workers and sister.
What do think about president No's new look?
:It's a looks like better, I knew that he surgery on his eyes.
>>> He looks better after undergoing surgery on his eyes.
Do you know of anyone that ended up looking worse after their cosmetic surgery?
:Sometimes I heard or saw about entertainer like Michael Jackson
>>> I heard some entertainers who underwent surgery like Michael Jackson.
Do you think Koreans generally look better today than when cosmetic surgery wasn't as common?
:Many people seems to beautiful or handsom, So I hope that they are happy with how them looks right now.
>>>Many people seem to be beautiful and handsome. I hope they are happy with their looks right now.
What do you think the next most popular cosmetic procedure will be?
:Actually I don't have any idea because I'm not intersting entertainer or politician
>>>Actually I don't have any idea because I'm not interested to become an entertainer or politician.
Please look at the corrected sentences Jack. Thanks for spending a little time to do your homework. See you later.
Sincerely,
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