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Hello Ms. Yeonji
Wow! What a question I guess
Well my paradise is when i'm happy wiht what i'm doing.
I just realized the answer to this question last Saturday night
Wheww!
I am really glad to know about your answer. It's a unique one^-^
>>>Here are some grammar corections:
What is your paradise?
=^-^
I think the paradise is not something else.
=I think paradise is not like any other things. (What do you mean by this?)
It is in happiness you feel.
=It is the happiness that you feel inside.
If you think you are happy now, present is the paradise to you no matter how bad present situation is.
=If you think you are happy now then the present is paradise to you no matter how bad the present situation is.
Teacher Khristine
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