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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   chris    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-01-18
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Hi Chris^-^

 

Well I would say it is more than good^-^

Thank you for making one^-^

 

>>>Here are some grammar corrections:

1.Walkin the classroom. Do not run.

=1. Just walk in the classroom. Do not run.


2.Respect your classmate.

=:)


3.Raise your hand when you have a question.

=:)


4. Be quiet and listen when your teacher is talking.

=:)


5.Do not fight with your friends.
=:)


1.community rules are called laws.

=Community... (Always start the sentence with capital letters. )


2.Rules tell us what to do and what not to do.
3.A citizen is a member of a community.
4.Good citizen volunteer to clean up a park.
5.Good citizen help their neighbor.


It is good?? ^0^ ^3^ 

 

Teacher Khristine^-^

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