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Thanks for making your diary Jack. See you again tomorrow.^^
Here are the corrected sentence: Please study them again.
Yes I know one woman in my office. she was accountant.
>>>Yes, I know a woman in my office. She is an accountant.
She was absence without notice
>>>She got absent without notice.
(absence- noun ; absent - adjective ; got absent / was absent - verb)
The company’s official retiring age is 60 but according to economic news, it is around 50 case of man.
>>>The company's official retiring age is 60 but according economic news, it's around 50 in case of males/men.
>>>The company's official retiring age is 60 but most men avail it at around 50.
>>>Most men opt early retirement at 50.
sometimes I think about that. but I don't know to solution about early retirment. Just do the best my job on now
>>>Sometimes I think about that but I don't know the solution to early retirement. I just want to do the best things in my job now.
I spend a lot of money for my hobby like snowboarding and the cost of driving. ( this sentence is great!)
actually I'm not preparing well for my a retired life. Just I have a bit saving deposits
>>>Actually, I'm not preparing well for my retired life. I just have a bit savings deposits.
( Please remember to start your sentence using a capital letter and end a dot or period.)
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