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Here are the corrections Jack. Please study them again. See you again tomorrow night. Thanks for your patience in doing your homework. T.T
Snowboarding make me happy because it is one of my favorite hobbies.
>>>Snowboarding makes me happy because it is one of my favorite hobbies.
It's very intersting sprots why it's making fast speed and I like sound of walk on snow.
>>>It's a very interesting sport because of the fast speed and I like the sound while walking on the snow.
It's a cold weather. It's a irony that I like sports is snowboarding and It's winter sports.
>>>The cold weather makes me sad.It's ironic that I like snowboarding but it's a winter sport.
another one is to crowded bus when my commute. so I go to my office by car but this way has many cost
>>>Another one is when I see a too crowded bus while commuting. So, I go to my office by car but it's expensive.
Best regards,
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