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Hi Ms. Yeonji^-^
Surely, that books sounds interesting
Well I guess I better start having sincere wishes and hopes then
so that my dreams would come true
(I'm sincerely wishing that you would be able to have a good score on your TOEIC Exam)
>>>Here are some of the gramamr corrections:
I've ever read 'Secret'.
=I always read the book "Secret"
Secret says that everything I really want will come true.
It was very interesting to me.
=It was very interesting for me.
=It caught my interest.
So, the day I read the book, I tried wanting a cup of coffee.
=So form that day I wanted to read a book, I tried wanting a cup of coffee.
And then, to my surprise,I got a cup of coffee.
So, I believed in Secret.
It says the more sincerely I hope, the faster dreams come true.
=It says that the more that I hope sincerely the faster my dreams would come true.
Just thinking about that makes me excited.
=(I like this sentence very much^-^)
Teacher Khristine
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