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Dear Young,
I appreciate your taking time to do your difficult homework.(lol)
Here are the corrected sentences:
I didn't really know the various meaning of "taste".
>>>I don't really the know the various meanings of taste.
Anyway, I told that I like a little spicy taste in last class. As a matter of fact, I like a litte salty and sweet food too.
>>>Anyway, I told you that I like little spicy taste during/ in our last class.
of course, I'd like to buy expensive clothes like other person.
>>>Of course, I'd like to buy expensive clothes like other people. ( always use plural noun with other ; example: other things, other people, other food -- use singular with another ; example: another thing, another taste)
And If I speak aditional taste about different things, Japan tour gave me a taste of foreign travel five years ago.So, I think that Japan travel is the most interesting than anywhere.
>>>If I talk about additional taste of different things... ( avoid starting your sentence with and because that is a connector. It connects two words ,phrases or sentence but not a sentence starter.)
So, I think that Japan travel is the most interesting than anywhere.
>>>So I think, Japan travel is the most interesting than anything else.
>>>So I think going to Japan is the most interesting than going to anywhere else.
See you again tomorrow Young...Happy Monday!
Cheers,
Teacher Emely
Teacher Emely
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