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Hello Ms. Yeonji
>>>Here are some of the grammar corections:
Khristine, I visited your facebook and I saw pictures of you.
You are soooooo beatiful and have a lovely smile.^^ (hehehehe Thank you very much Oh my heart is become big 
no just kidding...hehehe Thank you^-^You are also beautiful)
Oh, and you are the image of my friend.
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The importance of english in the modern society.
In modern society, english is getting more important.
=In the modern society, English is getting more and more important.
It is necessary in the business world.
The target of companies is be a global company.
Employees need to speak english to dialoge with foreigners.
=Employees need to speak in English to be able to get into a dialogue with foreigners.
So, companies have founded employees who are capable of speak english.
=So, companies are finding employees who are capable of speaking in English.
To have a relationship with a forein, we should understand their culture and personality.
=To have a good relationship with a foreigner, ...
By using English, we can adapt ourselves to globalism.
Therefore we need to have a sufficient ability which is communicating in english with foreigners.
Teacher Khristine
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