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Hi Alex! As a father, being so excited on the things you want your child to experience is but normal.^^
Here are your corrections:
LAST WEEKEND I WENT TO SWIMMING POOL WITH DOUTHER.
>I went to the swimming pool with my daughter last weekend.
SHE LOVE WATER AND AFRAID WATER.
>Though she's afraid of the water, she loves it.
>She loves the water even though she's afraid of it.
I SAID HER TO TRY FACE IN TO WATER. BUT SHE CAN'T.
>I told her to try facing the water but she can't.
SHE IS 40 MONTHS OLD, MAYBE IT'S MY HASTE.
>She is 40 months old and maybe I'm just in hurry or excited.
>Maybe I'm just in haste because she is just 40 months old.
I WANT SHE LOVE SPORTS IN HER LIFE, BUT IT'S HER CHOICE.
>I want her to love sports but that would still be her choice.
I JUST GIVE HER MANY CHANCE TO ENJOY VARIETY SPORTS.
>I'm just giving her a lot of chances to enjoy variety of sports.
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