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Hi Jae eun!!
Now I understand why you just woke up a while ago.^^
Anyway,, here are your corrections:
I was very tired.
>I am very tired.
I don't know why I'm so tired.
>good
I just feel my eyes heavy..
>I just feel that my eyes are heavy.
At lunch time, I went to the outback steak house with my friend.
>good
It was very happy time to us..
>It was a happy moment for us.
But I didn't have money.
>good
It was unintentional..
>good
Anyway, she treated me.
>good
So I have to give her money.
>So I have to pay her back.
I don't want to meet her tomorrow....
>good
In the evening, I went to English academy to TOEFL.
>In the evening, I went to English academy for TOEFL.
There was the first day when we made up study-group.
>That was our first day to form a group study.
Every member is so kind and passionate.
>good
I'd like to improve English skills with them.
>I'd like to improve my English skills with them.
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