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Hello Si-yun,
I am glad you decided to give a try to writing. First things first your written English is pretty god. I am a bit surprised actualy. Now, I need you to practice speaking the way that you write:)
I was born in Seoul. I have been living in there since I was born. I am a only child.
> The sentences here are correct, but you can also combine them to make one sentence.
> I was born as an only child in Seoul and have been living there ever since.
I’m interested in music. Especially Korean drum music.
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I’m joined Korean traditional music group.
> I joined a Korean traditional music group.
We practice once or twice a week. I have played Korean traditional music for 5 years, and I also can do Korean martial arts.
> :)
We named ‘taek kyun’. I have practiced for 7years. I have many hobbies. Climbing mountains, traveling by working, bicycling,…
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When I was a student, I travelled around Korea by working for a month 3times and bicycling 3times.
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Now I don’t have much time because I’m looking for a job. If I have much time I’d like to learn a djembe, it is an instrument of Africa
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Wow.
Pretty good.
See you in a while.
Teacher nEa:) |
