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Finally, the New Year 2014 came without fail.
> or... Finally, the New Year 2014 came as expected.
2013 was peaceful, smooth, calm and happy for me.
> OK
However, my physical stamina had weakened.
> OK
So I should strengthen my reduced stamina in this year, but I’m not sure whether I will be able to do it well or not.
> --------- just remove the "in" in "in this year" and say...... "this year.
Anyway, I greeted the New Year at home with my wife while watching TV.
> OK
On TV, they showed the scene that people gathered in several symbolic places for waiting the New Year.
> On TV, they showed people who are gathered in several symbolic places waiting for the New Year.
At the exact midnight, there were some events to celebrate the New Year liking tolling a big bell, parade, fireworks and singers’ performances.
> At exactly midnight, there were some events to celebrate the New Year with like tolling of a big bell, parade, fireworks and singers' performances.
Though they seemed to be happy, I don’t like it because those places are really crowded.
> OK
I like a calm and peaceful atmosphere and place.
> OK
> or..... I like a place with calm and peaceful atmosphere. |
