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Cellular phone is the primary communication tool in modern society.
>>>FANTASTIC!
Most of people have their own cell phones,kids even also have their phones in Korea.
>>>Most people have their own cell phone and even Korean kids have phones too.
There are many changes in human life by cell phone.
>>>There are many things/ changes cell phone can do to human life.
People can listen to the music, watch movies and television shows from it.
>>>People can listen to music, watch movies and television shows from it.
When there was not cell phone, we kept our time promises thoroughly.
>>>When there was no cellphone, we kept our time promises promptly.
I don't use the various functions of cell phone because I don't know the functions and I even don't like to know them.
>>>(Not bad! You have a point!)
I use cell phone just to call someone or take a message.(Of course, I sometimes send a text message.)
Thanks, Young
Dear Young,
I noticed how big your improvement in constructing sentences ! Sooner or later, you'll make it perfectly. Just keep going, okay?
Best Regards,
Teacher Emely
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