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It was the first weekend since the 2014 started.|
> OK
Since my wife and I went on a trip for the last year-end vacation last week, we just took a rest at home.
> good
We overslept as much as we wanted to and ate some meals.
> OK
After the meal, we slept again!
> OK .... (Hahah, I am jealous :( )
And then, I cleaned the house with a vacuum cleaner and a mop and ran the washing machine.
> OK
After the house chores, we went to a special restaurant to celebrate our anniversary.
> OK
The atmosphere was quite peaceful and sometimes they played live music performances.
> OK -------------- the restaurant atmosphere can be referred to as "ambience"
We had a romantic evening with delicious dishes.
> OK
Tomorrow, my mother and brother visited us.
> The next day, my mother and brother visited us.
We looked around some model houses that are now being constructed.
> We looked around at some model houses that .......
The modern apartments are really well equipped with interiors and gardens.
> O K .
And then, we ate lunch together.
> OK
Wow! This is really very impressive! Good job, Sir! It was almost perfect with just the exception of one minor correction (referring to "The next day" -- in place of "Tomorrow" ) Keep it up!! I hope to see some more of your compositions!
Thank you for an excellent job!
Jing |
