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The weather got colder sharply.
> The weather got extremely colder.
According to the weather report, it will be the coldest week in this winter.
> According to the weather report, it will be the coldest week this winter.
Incidentally, I read an article about a case study about appearance.
> OK
It said attractive teens get better chances and grades.
> OK
I just agree with it partially.
> OK
Some parts are correct, but other parts are controversial and not clear.
> OK
> .... not clear or unclear
In my opinion, the conditions to estimate people are various.
> ............................... are varied (instead of various)
They are their work skills, techniques, performances, personality, background of growth and so on.
> OK
Of course, appearance is also very important point.
> Of course, appearance is also a very important point.
However, I think that a good appearance doesn’t mean just handsome or pretty.
> OK
It’s a pleasing appearance and it is affected by their personality.
> GOOD POINT! :)
So, I think we don’t need to cling to take care of our appearance that much.
> OK :-)
> Or.... That's why we shoud not just rely/bank on our appearance that much.
Great opinion!!
Great compositions!!
Congratulations, Sir and Keep it up!!!! |
