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We had a class with a heavy topic.
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It was about a crime, especially very terrible and cruel one.
> OK
My tutor also gave me a question that needs a careful consideration.
> GREAT SENTENCE
She said some kinds of serial crimes only occurred in developed countries.
> .............. only occur in developed countries.
I think there are two types of those cruel crimes.
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One is an impulsive thing and the other is a carefully plotted thing.
> I LIKE YOUR CHOICE OF WORDS IN THIS COMPOSITION
The targets of the first type are random and usually there is no reason to commit the crime.
> ............... Usually, there is no motive for the crime.
The second type is extremely careful.
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Their targets are usually physically weak people like women and children.
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The common point between the two types is that their targets are not related to the criminals’ personal enmities.
> VERY GOOD SENTENCE
We should investigate both the criminals’ mind and social structures.
> Good.
DEAR SIR,
I love the points that you have raised here. I also love how you have articulated on the types of crimes and the kinds of people that are involved, whether they be the offender or the victim. Your choice of words are very impressive. It shows how broad your vocabulary is and how you so articulately delivered your thoughts and opinions. Keep up the good work! I highly encourage you to continue writing and expressing your thoughts and insights. :-)
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