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Finally, we gave up going to the chocolate exhibit because of its high entrance fee.
> VERY GOOD
Additionally, I thought that I would be likely to buy chocolates on impulse if I see the appetizing goods.
> Haha! OKAYY!!
Instead, we went on a simple picnic to Gangnam Station.
> GOOD
It is one of the biggest and the most crowded downtowns in Seoul.
> GOOD
It’s famous for pubs, clubs, restaurants, academies and etc.
> OK ...... But remove the "and" before the "etc"
- It's famous for pubs, clubs, restaurants, academies, etc.
The street was REALLY crowded!
> OK
I hate such a congested venue.
> GOOD
Actually, it had been over 1 year since I last visited there.
> or.. It had actually been over a year since I last went there.
We looked around the street and ate meals and desserts.
> OK
And then, we moved to other street to see one of my old friends.
> And then we went to see one of my old friends.
We went to a famous pub and drank Korean traditional alcoholic beverage.
> Very good!
We enjoyed our time and stayed until the late night.
> We enjoyed our time and stayed out until late at night.
We had a joyful evening but very tired.
>or..... We had a fun but very tiring day.
> or.... We had a fun time but we were very tired.
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