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Today, I’m going to on a trip to Osaka, one of the biggest cities in Japan.
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My wife and her brother are going to be with me.
> OK
> or... My wife and her brother are going with me.
> or... I am travelling with my wife and her brother.
> ** There are so many other ways to say it. :-)
It was the first time to go on a trip together.
> It was our first time to go on a trip together.
> It was the first time for us to travel together.
Actually, I already have been there twice.
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The reason why I will visit there again is that the flight ticket is relatively cheap than other far countries.
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ is relatively cheaper than other far countries.
Also, the public transportation system is well equipped and I’m familiar in Osaka.
............................................................................................................ I'm familiar with Osaka.
Osaka is a port city, thus it’s close to the sea.
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We are going to visit a good spot to see the city and ocean view.
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> or.... We are going to visit a good spot to appreciate the city and the ocean views/scene/scenery.
And then, we will look around some of big shopping malls and main streets.
> OK... or... And then. we will look around some of the big shopping malls and the main streets.
The period is very short; though it will be for 2 nights and 3days and the full day schedule is just one day.
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So, it will be a tight schedule.
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