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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2014-01-29
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I went to on a trip to Osaka with my wife and her brother for 2 nights and 3 days.
> GOOD!

However, our full-day scheduled trip was just on the second day.
> GOOD! or.... However, the only time we experienced our full-day scheduled trip was on the second day.

We departed from Korea at 7 PM on Friday and returned at 3 PM on Sunday.
> GOOD!

The two days were just for traveling.
> GOOD!

So it was a very tight schedule.
> GOOD!

On Saturday, we went to Osaka Castle Park.
> GOOD!

It is a big park which has a very huge ancient castle.
> GOOD!

It was too wide, so it took so much time to look around.
> VERY GOOD!

And then, we travelled to a suburb region of Osaka to see a view on a mountain.
> VERY GOOD!

Unfortunately, the weather was so cloudy, so we couldn’t see a clear view.
> GOOD!

In the evening, we ate several Japanese dishes with Japanese fresh beer.
> GOOD!!

Though I enjoyed our trip, I was very tired.
> GOOD!

I truly realized that my vigor has weakened.
> GOOD!

I truly realized that my vigor has weakened.
> GOOD!

 

 

DEAR SIR,

WOW!! DID I JUST SEE A PERFECT COMPOSITION???? GOOD JOB!!! I ENCOURAGE YOU TO WRITE MORE! YOU HAVE A VERY GOOD WRITING SKILL!

JING

 

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