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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2014-02-10
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Everybody in our world has basic human rights.
> GOOD
 
One of them is the right to pursue one’s better life.
> GOOD
> or... One of them is the right to pursue a better life.

I think one of the main reasons why they escape from their homeland is that their environment is too harsh to live anymore.
> VERY GOOD!  .....................................................................................................................................................................to live in anymore.

Someone wants to escape from starving or avoid from suppression of their bad or violent government.
> Some people want to escape starvation or to avoid suppression by their bad and violent government.
----------------- GOOD  CHOICE OF WORDS -----------------

So, it is the basic human right that the refugees seek asylum.
> VERY GOOD!

I think it can’t be judged by law because the basic human rights are prior to law.
> I think this cannot be condemned by the law because the basic human right is above (far more i mportant than) the law.

Unfortunately, many countries don’t accept the refugees and even they are repatriated because they want to avoid conflict with their mother countries.
> VERY GOOD!!

Supranational organizations like UN should make any solution to help them
> VERY GOOD! ..............................................or....come up with solutions to help them.


GREAT COMPOSITION! GREAT INSIGHT! I LOVE YOUR OPINIONS AND HOW THEY ARE STATED! 
Good job, sir!!

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