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Dear Young,
It's good to see your diary today. I believe you stretch your time very well to do all things in time.
See you tonight!
Teacher Emely
Corrections:
If I retire from my work, I'll starve to death before long.(^ ^)
>>> If I retire from work, I'll starve to death before long.
>>>You may also say, "If I retire from work now, I'll / I might starve to death before long.
I want to continue my work until regular retirement, but I haven't enough time.
>>>I want to continue working until I reach the regular retirement age but I haven't got enough time.
Most people desire a job for all life, there is no such thing any longer.
>>>Most people desire for a lifetime job but there's no such thing like that anymore
Being a banker in Korea is not what it used to be.
>>>Great!
Elderly bankers more than me had experienced good years and earned much money.
>>>Older bankers than me had experienced good years and earned much money.
Since we had been helped by IMF relief loan in 1997, business and work circumstances had been changed rapidly.
>>>Bravo!
There is no stable employment.
>>>Terrific!
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