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This winter also wanes without a fail.
> VERY GOOD! very artistically/beautifully said.
Though it’s still cold in the morning and night, the overall weather is getting warmer.
> VERY GOOD
In this winter, it was not very cold and it didn’t snow heavily.
> or...... It wasn't very cold and it didn't even snow heavily this winter.
I think it was a mild winter.
> GOOD
Of course, it was different by regions.
> or... Of course, it was different by the reqions.
> or.... Of course, it was different from region to region.
Some coastal regions had a snow bomb (it means that it snowed very heavily like a snow boom hit the region).
> or.... Some coastal regions had a snowstorm.
Fortunately, it just snowed lightly.
> GOOD
The biggest problem in this winter is the fine dust that came from China.
> The biggest problem this winer is the fine dust that came from China.
How should we solve this problem?
> GOOD
Because of the global atmospheric phenomenon, the pollution in a specific country is not its own problem.
> VERY GOOD
It affects other neighbor countries.
> GOOD
Even the country which makes the pollution do not compensate to the victims at all.
> GOOD
We should find a reasonable solution.
> VERY GOOD.
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