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On Saturday, my wife and I met (with) my parents-in-law since it’s my father-in-law’s birthday (on the - remove) next Wednesday.
> OK -- with some very minor corrections
The reason why we met in advance is that we are so busy on a weekend.
> OK ... or... The reason why we got together in advance is because we are always busy on weekends.
Moreover, if we meet on a weekend after work, we must have a terrible traffic jam in a rush hour.
> OK .........................................................................., we might get caught in a terrible traffic jam during the rush hour.
We ate grilled beef tenderloin for lunch.
> GOOD
The quality of the beef was very good, so we really enjoyed our lunch.
> VERY GOOD
After lunch, we moved to his shop (a singing room) and enjoyed singing.
> OK .......... we, went to his "karaoke bar" and enjoyed singing.
I enjoyed singing as much as I wanted to after a long time. In the evening
> VERY GOOD
we looked around the street near the shop.
> GOOD.. or.... We also looked around the streed near the shop.
The shop is located in a downtown, so there are a lot of young people who enjoy their Saturday evening
> ............................................................. do, there were a lot of young people who were enjoying their Saturday evening.
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