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i have a dream
>> CORRECT 
i want to create ios8
>> CORRECT
and i wnat a job at apple headquarters in software,
>> I want a job at the Apple headquarters, in the software department.
a my dream is big
>> CORRECT
OR >> I have a big dream.
i'm exactly apple head office
>> To be exact, I want to be the head of the Apple office.
a finding employment
>> Finding a job is _____
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Hello Hyun! Good job in this composition! However, I noticed that some of your sentences here are incomplete. You need to use proper punctuation marks too.
Have a good night!
Ciao!
~Teacher Irick~ |
