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My power flurries through the air into the ground.
My soul is spiraling in frozen fractals all around.
And one thought crystallizes like an icy blast.
I'm never going back, the past is in the past.
-> This stanza shows the process of the materialization of her magical power that makes the ice. ----- Indeed! It displays her powers
-> The actual movie scene of this stanza also shows the process of building her own magical icy castle. --------- Great!
-> I think the description of this stanza is fantastically poetic. ----- And I think, Sir, that you have brilliantly stated how you feel towards it! :-) This sentence is absolutely perfect! :-)
-> She is now releasing her magical power as much as she wanted without any worries. -------------------- Very Good
-> She doesn’t need to worry about hurting her dear family, people or anything. ---------------------------------- Very Good
-> She has been totally changed. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Very Good
-> She is satisfied with her new situation, so she doesn’t want to go back at all. --------------------------------- Very Good |
