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Hello Crystal,
This piece is very short but it is a start. I am glad you wrote. Let's practice yur written English.
Here are our corrections:
Hi~It's the first time that I post my writing.
> Hi, It's the first time that I would be posting my writings.
> Hi, this is the first time that I would be posting my written work.
Actually, I was supposed to write to the questions made for the teachers' exam.
> Actually I was suppose to write answers o the questions made for the teacher's exam.
But I don't even want to read the question. It's too long and looks hard. I will post it later.
> :) Good sentences.
By the way, when I memorize vocabulary, I make some sentences with them.
> By the way, when I memorized the vocabulary, I tried to make sentences with them.
I want to make sure if there are some errors.
>:)
1. The car left behind the trail of tires.
> The car left behind a trail.
> The car left some tire tracks behind. (proper expression)
2. He may not have said like that with spiteful mind.
> He might not have said that with a spiteful mind.
3. The criminer ignited the house in the middle of the night.
> The criminal burned the house in the middle of the night.
>>> Ignited is used for gasoline; lighters; something that wuold be the source of the fire; it could als me started.
>>> The criminal ignited the bomb that destroyed the house.
> >> She ignited my passion for learning.
4. As global warming proceeds, the glacier is receding.
>:)) Very good.
5. Assults on ecosystem has been done by the human.
> Assaults on the ecosystem has been done by humans.
That's all. Also, besides the five sentences, if you check errors in my writing here, I will appreciate it.
> That's all. Also, besides the five sentences, if you could check the errors in my writing here, I would appreciate it.
Have a great morning. See you later.
Teacher NEa:) |
