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Dear Young,
The Filipino Chinese community celebrates the Lunar New Year in our country. I'm a Baptist Christian so I don't celebrate it. I hope you will have fun in Jeju. I wish I could fly with your airplane to see your fantastic island... By the way, tomorrow will be your last class with me. I'm sure I'm gonna miss you.I'm praying that you will still continue to have your class with You Can English. Good luck and good health always!
Best regards,
Teacher Emely
Corrections!
There is a lunar year holiday this weekend in Korea.
>>>Lunar New Year will be celebrated by Koreans this weekend.
Do you celebrate a lunar year?
>>>Do you celebrate Lunar New Year?
Many of people visit their hometown by car, bus, train, airplane and ship.
>>>Many people visit their hometown by car, bus, train, airplane and ship.
That's why there are terrible traffic jams in highway and road.
>>> That's why there are terrible traffic jams in the highways and roads.
Some people should drive their car over 8 hours to reach(arrive at) their hometown.
>>>Bravo!
I was born in Jeju Island and lived in there until I graduated from high school.
>>>Terrific!
I am going to visit my hometown by airplane.
>>>Good for you!
The only demerit of boarding airplane is too much expensive.
>>>Correct!
I'm looking forward to visiting home.
>>>(You just forgot the punctuation mark)
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