The weather became fine again after the drizzle yesterday. > VERY GOOD
The sky was deep-blue and the view was also very clear. > VERY GOOD
By the way, we had a new employee this week. > VERY GOOD
She was only 24 years old. > GOOD She is onoy 24 years old.
She got a job just after graduation of university. > She got this job right after graduating from the university.
Her job description is quality control. > GOOD
She seems have a good personality and looks an outgoing person. > She seems to have a good personality and looks like she's an outgoing person.
After work, we had a dinner to welcome her joining. > GOD - After work, we had a dinner to welcome her to the company.
We ate pork-belly with a lot of Soju and beer. > VERY GOOD
Since it was Friday, my colleagues drank more than usual without the burden to go to work at the following day. > VERY GOOD
We enjoyed our time and hope that our new colleague will be able to adopt our company and work together for a long time. > VERY GOOD |