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Korea is now in very deep sorrow caused by a terrible accident happened 1 week ago.
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A passenger ship that was having hundreds of passengers sank.
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As a result, a lot of passengers died and there are still many missing people in the ship.
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Though the rescue team is trying to find them and lift the sunken ship up, it seems to take more time.
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The more sad and provoking thing is that it was caused by human error.
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Almost all the staffs related to the sailing of the passenger ship took things easy.
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> or.... Every staff responsible for the voyage of the passenger ship became negligent and took things for granted
They didn’t obey most of the safety regulations and remained spectators even in the urgent accidental situation.
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The most heart breaking thing is that the high school students who were going to on a school trip to Jeju were victims.
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Korea is crying.
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