| |
The weather is getting hotter.
> VERY GOOD
Now, the highest temperature during the day is over 30 degrees in some regions.
> VERY GOOD
Also, trees and shrubs in streets and gardens have become leafier.
> VERY GOOD ....................... or............................. have become greener/more robust.
More people enjoy taking a walk, exercise and picnic in parks, streets, and so on.
> this is good.. but since the first object of the verb is in "-ing" form, it is better if the succeeding ones be in "-ing" form too....
- More people enjoy taking a walk, excercising and having picnics in the parksor streets, and so on.
- More people enjoy leisurely walks, excercises, picnics in the parks or streets, and so on.
Then, summer will come soon and the weather will become very hot.
> VERY GOOD
Incidentally, I had a dinner with my manager unexpectedly.
> Good...................... or.................... Incidentally, I had an unexpected dinner with my manager.
My manager said about it just 1 hour before the closing.
> or.............. My manager informed me just an hour before closing.
Since I rejected his suggestion having dinner together twice before, I couldn’t reject again this time.
> Ohhh! Hahaha! Indeed!
> And this is a very good sentence. :)
Two of our business partners also joined us.
> VERY GOOD
We drank Soju and beer with some dishes.
> VERY GOOD
Them, the two left and my manager started nagging me about my performance and work style.
> VERY GOOD sentence
It was a very tired evening.
> It was a very tiring evening.
|
