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Pronounciation of these words, "English, language" is difficult for me.
>>>Pronouncing the words English and language is difficult for me.
My wife explained the differences of my pronounciation and her,but I could'nt meet her expectation.
>>>My wife explained the differences between my pronunciation and hers, but I couldn't meet her expectation.
By the way, I don't like to drive because of my poor driving skill.
>>>Correct!
I'm not good at driving, it results from the weakness of space perception.
>>>I'm not good at driving because I'm poor in space perception.
Space perception ability influence greatly on parking of car.
>>>Space perception ability infuences/ affects parking of cars greatly.
That's why I mainly use public trasportations in center of a city.(complicated down town)
>>>That's why Imainly use public transportations in downtown.
There are short of parking lots in Korea, especially in Seoul.
>>>There is a shortage of parking lots in Korea especially in Seoul.
>>>There are no enough parking spaces in Korea especially in Seoul.
Many people go to their workplace by using public transportations instead of their cars.
>>>Correct!
If there is heavy rain or snow in rush hours, buses and subway trains are too crowded with passengers.
>>>Correct!
We express this scenery(situation) as a hell.
>>>We describe this scenery as a hell.
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Always,
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