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Why do we learn?
> VERY GOOD
Learning is one of human natures from the ancient.
> Learning is one of the human attributes/characteristics since the ancient times.
We have developed ourselves by learning.
> VERY GOOD
We have invented really a lot of revolutionary things.
> VERY GOOD........... We have invented a lot of revolutionary things. -------------------- drop the "really" but if you want to put emphasis on how much or how many we have invented..... You can say: .......................... We have invented a whole lot of revolutionary things.
As a result, mankind enjoys the convenient modern life.
> VERY GOOD
So, we can’t deny that learning made the current our civilization.
> GOOD... or....... So we can't deny that learning made our current civilization.
>.............................................................. that learning developed our current civilization.
> .............................................................. that learning improved our cirrent civilization.
Nowadays, students learn a lot of kinds of subjects and they are totally different with the one in the past.
> VERY GOOD .................... many different kinds of subjects......................
These are usually math, languages, technology, geography and so on.
> VERY GOOD
Actually, a lot of them are not essential for our daily life and work places
> VERY GOOD --------- and I AGREE! Hahaha
I think the reason why we should learn those subjects which seem unnecessary is that we would be able to find our aptitude and career while learning them.
> PERFECT~ I am very impressed by this statement... and I totally agree with your opinion, Sir.
Additionally, I guess the other minor reason is for intellectual curiosity.
> PERFECT..... Hahaha! Again, a very sensible and smart opinion. :D
GOOD JOB!!!!
Sir, you have really been doing a great job. The corrections I put there are not really strict grammatical corrections as you may notice but just better ways to state the message or idea in your sentence. Anyway, I always believed that you are one of the more intelligent and smarter students that I have. And because of this, I really value your opinion on how you perceive the dynamic characteristics of the English language. I want to know your reaction to the evolution and changes that have been observed and are becoming more and more popular and acceptable.
Please read through the article shown in the link below.
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2014/05/15/its-okay-to-end-your-sent_n_5325324.html?ncid=fcbklnkushpmg00000063
Thank you.
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