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It was the 65th day since the Korean War occurred.
> GOOD............year since the Korean War occurred.
> or...... It was the 65th annual commemoration of the Korean War.
This day is very important for Korea.
> VERY GOOD
We should remember our tragic and sad history and try to prevent another war.
> VERY GOOD
Every year on the day, several events are held by government officials, public and private organization related to it.
> VERY GOOD
Also, there are still a lot of people who underwent the tragic war.
> GOOD .............. Also, there were a lot of people who experienced the tragic war.
Usually, they are our parents’ and grandparents’ generations.
> VERY GOOD
Sadly, it is going to gradually forgotten as time goes by.
> GOOD.................................. be gradually forgotten as time goes by.
Now, more young generation and student don’t know exactly about the Korean War.
> VERY GOOD.........................................students don't know exactly what the Korean War is all about.
They learn the history less compared with in the past.
> They learn lesser of the history as compared with the past generation.
Some of them can’t remember the exact date or year of the war and even who our enemy was.
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