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I read an article about that Namhan Mountain Fortress had named UNESCO world heritage.
> GOOD .............. I read an article about the Namhan Mountain Fortress being named by UNESCO as a world heritage.
Actually, it was quite close to my parents’ house.
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So, when I lived with my parents, sometimes I went to there with my family or friends.
> VERY GOOD.......................................................... I went there (remove "to")
0r..................... So, when I lived with my parents, I used to go there sometimes with my family or friends.
The fortress is built along the top region of Namhan Mountain and it is now for a trail.
> VERY GOOD .................................................................................... and it now serves as a trail.
I didn’t realize that it is that very precious as that UNESCO registered it as a world heritage.
> GOOD ............. I didn't realize that it is that precious for UNESCO to register it as a world heritage.
There are several buildings of Chosun dynasty in the fortress.
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One of them was used for a temporary palace during Byongjaholan caused by Chinese military about 500 years ago.
> VERY GOOD ..... One of them was used as a temporary palace.......................
At the end of the war, the Chosun king surrendered to the Chinese army and went down on his knees in front of the enemy general.
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