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Students usually do not like the subject, history.
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Actually, I’m not sure whether the students of the other countries are the same with Korean students.
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Anyway, a lot of Korean students think it is a boring and just needing memorizing subject.
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However, I was not.
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I was interested in history and it is the same now.
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The most important reason why we should learn our history is to avoid the same mistakes of the past.
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Historically, there were several “bad decisions” of the leaders, they were usually kings, and they made their people unhappy.
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or......... Historically, there were several "bad decisions" made by our leaders who were usually kings, and they made their people unhappy.
So, with a careful examination our history, we can reduce the possibility to have the same mistakes.
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Nevertheless, it’s interesting that sometimes people make the same bad decisions.
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