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These days, Japan and Korea has been running to an aging society.
> VERY GOOD
Japan is especially more serious, but Korea is also following the Japan’s trace.
> VERY GOOD...... or........ Japan's case is especially more serious but Korea is a close behind it.
About 40~50 years ago, was a baby-boom era after the Korean War.
> Forty - fifty years ago, right after the Korean War, was the baby-boom era for Korea.
However, about 30 years ago, the birth rate has been reducing consistently.
> VERY GOOD
Reduction of the birth rate is quite bad for our economy.
> VERY GOOD
Ironically, economy situation is also one of the reasons for it.
> GOOD ..... Ironically, economic situation is also one of the reasons for it.
People should earn more money to get married and have a baby.
> PERFECT
Or with other reasons, people have been avoiding getting married and having a baby more.
> VERY GOOD........ or..... People have also been avoiding getting married and having a baby for some other reasons.
Our government officials and politicians must focus to break the vicious circle of the economy caused by the aging society and prepare for it.
> WOW! THIS LAST STATEMENT IS AWESOME! IT IS PERFECT! :) GOOD JOB, SIR! |
