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   Á¦ ¸ñ   Insects, a hopeful but grotesque new food source    »ó Å  
   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2014-10-02
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The population on the earth has been increasing consistently.
> PERFECT

In comparison, it has a limitation to produce the food sources especially for protein.
> VERY GOOD

Until now, we get protein usually from livestock like pigs, chickens, cows and so on.
> VERY GOOD

The biggest problem for that is that they need too much amounts of feedstuff.
> PERFECT

To feed them, we should harvest more amounts of crops and it needs a lot of energy.
> PERFECT

Accordingly, we need a new food source for protein and insects had begun to receive attention among the researchers.
> THIS IS EXCELLENT

According to them, insects have enough protein sources to alternative the existing food sources.
> VERY GOOD...........................................................sources to be a possible alternative to the existing food sources.

To feed them, it needs less space and feedstuff.
> PERFECT
 
In other  words,  it’s a fantastic food source; excepting their looks.
> Hahahah! This is so true, Sir. :) And your sentence is very good. :) 

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