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The weather got far colder from this Monday after the autumn rain.
> VERY GOOD ----- (just remove "from"............ so it should say: The weather got colder this Monday after the autumn rain.
The leaves of maple and gingko trees in the streets have changed their color from green to red, orange and yellow.
> PERFECT
This makes us feel more that it is approaching late autumn.
> VERY GOOD or... This makes us feel more that late autumn is approaching.
The dress of people is also becoming thicker.
> People have started wearing thicker clothes.
By the way, I met one of my close colleagues and his wife late in the evening.
> PERFECT
We drank Maggulli, Soju and beer with several dishes.
> VERY GOOD
Later, two of my juniors went to our pub and joined together.
> Later, two of my juniors came to the pub where we were and joined us.
We drank until the late night.
> VERY GOOD...... or..... We drank until late at night.
By the way, my wife also wanted to join us but she worked overtime.
> SO PERFECT
- I love that you are using overtime and not overwork like most Koreans do
She leaved the office too late, so she went back home straight.
> She left the office too late, so, she went straight back home. |
